As we discussed in class, your blog assignment this week is to post a reflection on your blog work so far this year.
To do this, I ask that you look over ALL (yes, all) of your blog work so far. If you find anything missing, now is the time to get yourselves up to date. When you look it over (and look at the comments provided by others), think about 1 to 3 things you would like to improve about your work.
Then, write a reflection about those improvements and post it here.
This work is due Friday, October 24th.
The Orange Shagamuffins
15 years ago
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I think I can improve my work by outting more details and by making my work more descritave
i need to practice making sure i pull good info from the articles articles i read and transfere them into my own better discription.
After reading over my posts I have realized that I could improve on alot. I don't really elaberate that much so maybe next time I could try to make my post more detailed and longer. I also think I should try to only say things that are important and leave out pointless things.
Improvements
In the comments I was given, I was told to split my work up into paragraphs. I did that most of the time, but I forgot to in the reflection I was commented on. I personally think that I need to work on getting my opinions straight before posting my reflection so that my reflection doesn’t get confusing. Also, I think I should read the article through a couple times to make sure I am getting all the information and I’m getting all the correct information. One other thing I think I need to do is, read my reflection through a few times before posting it so that I can make sure everything is spelled correctly and worded correctly.
After I read all of my posts, comments, and comments given to me, i learned that I need to instead over covering a whole bunch of feilds in one topic, i should stick with one subtopic, and give a lot more detal and reasoning on the topic.
I also just need to give just more information over all and explain it more.
After I read all of my posts, I think that I could work on not adding any extra writing (getting right to the point). I also think that I could work on answering the questions a little bit more directly maybe by putting a little more information. One last thing that I think I should do is read the article through a couple of times before I post my comment so I understand what I am reading.
Science Reflection: By looking at my recent blog work I realized that I need a lot of work. I am good at putting in details but I’m not good at breaking my ideas up without awkward spaces. I also need to work on answering the questions with even MORE detail so my answers have a little more to them. I think I should also use more descriptive words instead of boring words. Someone commented that I should give more examples about what other people think about the subject, maybe that would help me make my reflections clearer.
Reflection
One thing that I noticed while reading over my blog work is that I need to start getting more information into my blog work and make it a little bit longer. The other thing that I noticed was that I needed to start getting some longer words into my writing.
I noticed that I get right to the point and I write well, but there just isn't enough detail. When I write future articles I will make sure to read the article multiple times and ask questions so I completely understand what I am reading.
I think I can improve by add more detail and being more specific. Also I think that I should try to make my work longer.
While I was reading my past articles I noticed that no one commented on my week 2 article. I felt sad that no one liked it. I can improve by adding details, by summarizing better, and finding more interesting articles. I wish some one commented on mine so I could have gotten feedback.
1) I would like to get in the work earlier so I don’t need to do it at last minute
2) I want to spend more time on it so my work is better
One thing that I saw that needed improvement in my work was sometimes what I am saying is very unclear. Like when I’m writing it, I know exactly what I’m saying but as I was re-reading my work I couldn’t understand some things so I had to think about it for a couple of minutes before I understood it. Another thing that I had trouble with was punctuation. In most of my posts there was at least one part where I needed a comma, but since I didn’t have one it was very unclear.
I’ll improve these things by getting someone in my family to read my response before I post it so I know it will make sense to other people.
I can improve on writing more detail in my blogs. I could be more specific in my blogs. By explaining more about what the topic is. I also can make the posts longer.
P.S. I like the air plane lab videos.
After looking threw all of my bogs I realized that there is a lot of ways that I can improve my work. I Think that I could add more to my reflections by answering the questions more thou rally. I also think that I can add more details to all of my writing.
I think that I need to improve on adding more detail in my reflections and getting more information about something before writing about it. I also realized that I need to organize my writing more by putting the same category into the same paragraphs so it doesn't sound sloppy.
I hope to improve on my comments!!!
Since I’ve read my posts, I’ve learned that my grammar and punctuation need work. Another thing that wouldn’t hurt, is to work on making my posts longer (this doesn’t count) and more in depth. My comments have actually been liked according to the responses I’ve received, so I do not believe I have to work on making my responses more interesting (I hope). Other than that, I hope I’m doing a pretty good job (feel free to disagree) and I hope to keep up with my good work
I read my comments and realized that I sometimes need to write more, and be more detailed and discriptive when im writing but I at least get right to the point and dont get off topic. (I used to have that problem). I also need to get my work done earlier, I usually just say to myself, "Oh I have a week I dont need to right now!" and I would always say it and often it would be to late.
I think that i can improve on not getting the blog in late and work on spelling and also to make my work more descriptive.
I think that I could really benefit from better time management and putting facts from articles in my own words. I also think that I could improve by adding more detail on more important information, rather than the unimportant stuff
In the last articles on the blog I need to read over the work. I wrote learner instead of learned. Sure spell check should have picked that up but it didn’t because learner is a real word. Also on the weekly science articles I should summarize up the article more and give less detail.
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