As we discussed in class, your blog assignment this week is to post a reflection on your blog work so far this year.
To do this, I ask that you look over ALL (yes, all) of your blog work so far. If you find anything missing, now is the time to get yourselves up to date. When you look it over (and look at the comments provided by others), think about 1 to 3 things you would like to improve about your work.
Then, write a reflection about those improvements and post it here.
This work is due Friday, October 24th.
The Orange Shagamuffins
15 years ago
Posts
20 comments:
I think that I can improve on my posting. Some ways I think I can imrove my posting is: I should reread my work more carefully because I think I could have answered some of the questions better. Another way I think I can improve by checking my grammar and making sure my sentences make sense. Finally, I also think I can improve my work is by, if it is a post where you have to find a article, I should look for more interesting articles so people will comment on my article more.
By:
Pony Girl
Reflection:
I think that i could imporove by my topic choosing. I could choose a more interesting topic that i could allaberate on and can spread my opinion on. I also sometimes wait till the last day to do my blog assingments so i don't look over my work to see if i had understood the article enough to write a good reflection. Lastly I think i could improve on soemthing else besides choosing a topic. I could work on the actual writing and see if i answer the question correctly!
BY :CHRISSYBROWN08
After going back, and looking at my blog-work so far, there are a couple things I could o better:
1. I feel like I need to read what the criteria for the assignment, and then meet ALL of it, in my writing that I post on the blog.
2. Also, I need to read over my work one more time before I post it, because sometimes there are silly mistakes that I make, which can be avoided by taking an extra minute to proof-read my writing.
3. The last thing I could improve on, is making my posts have more DETAIL, because it is important for the reader to have details to grasp onto, so that they have a better understanding.
I think, if I do all of this, my work on the blog will improve by a lot.
I think that what I can work on is to find more tuff instead of asking other people for ideas. Also to not wait till the last minute because I don’t have time to think it over. Last I should give a little bit more detail on assignments.
After looking over what I have written for the blog so far, here are 3 things I could improve on:
1. I really have to get better at spelling and punctuation. I have to reread my writing more before I post it.
2. I have to put more detail that is needed, but have to learn to take out unneeded detail
3. I also think that I could have made my posts in easier words and more like a 12 year old wrote it.
I think my previous responses were not bad I gave some examples and some information but there is always room for improvement. I think if I said were I got everything so they could find it if they liked it. More follow up details would help
i like how you did the shark with the legs that is real cool that was going to be my numder 1 choose that one but it is ok so how did you fingd that out because that is a cool thing that you post so i think how you siad that the people found it that is real cool how you siad that the sciencetists said that that is cool.
I think I can improve my posting work. I should stop doing that thing where I copy and paste the whole article and such. I should just put the URL in my comment for the article. I also think I should include more text into my comments. Also, I should tell about the article. I realize that Copy and pasting the article is a nucence, so I will stop doing t hat. I don't think any grammar improvement is needed. Just more text and I need to stop copy and pasting the articles; I just need the URL.
Railroad fan.
I have finally looked at my posts and some of the things I have to correct/fix is when I noticed that i 1.that i have to focus on my spelling alot more.
2. that i have to check on my notes to. So when I write down my notes i have to make sure it is not excaclly the same.
3.That i have to improve on how much info i put into my comments because i dont put that much info in.
BY:
STEWIE213
I think I should have put more information about the anthrax. In addition, I should have made I longer or make it shorter. It would have been better by making it less facts and more interesting. I think it was boring I should read stuff that I like.
I could improve in my blogwork. One thing I could improve on is adding more information about the topic so the reader doesn't get lost. Another thing I could improve on is checking my work over carefully. One more thing I could improve on is not repeating myself (I did that a lot).
I think I should reread my my work a more carefully before posting it. I've been doing all of my blogs the night before it's due (including this one) so I think I should finish my blog work as soon as possible. Another thing I need to improve on in my blog work is giving more information in them when we reflect on other articles. Lastly, I think I have to choose more interesting articles. Like I said before, I usually do my blog work on the night before it's due so I choose the first article I find on google.
Ways to improve:
1. A few people that commented on my article said that I should include more facts. In my next weekly science report I’ll be sure to include more facts about the article I read.
2. I think that I should expand more in each blog assignment. Next assignment I will try to add in a lot more details.
3. While re-reading my previous assignments I noticed some small spelling and punctuation errors that I could easily correct next time I do an assignment.
4. I think that I should work on doing my assignment earlier, instead of waiting until the last minute. I noticed that most of the assignments I did were posted on a Thursday, when the due date was Friday.
There is always room for improvement. I thought I did well at first but in my last couple of posts I think they were too short and with not a lot of detail. This is also what people who commented on me said. So in the rest of my posts from now on I will try to include more detail and make them longer. If not I will add on to them in a second comment.
think that I could add a lot more details. I could answer the questions a lot better .
I also think I could make more interesting titles that pulls the readers in.
I think i can do better in putting blog work up because i sometimes wait for the last day to do it and then my computer will end up not working and then i have a really big problem and so ya. I can also do better in picking topics because times i pick stuff that sounds really cool and then it ends up just being 2 sentances long.
I think that I can improve my blog work by adding a little more information into my work. Also I think that my work would be better if don’t wait until the last day to do it so that each day I could look over it and see if I want to add anything or I made a mistake that I didn’t catch it the day before. And last, I think that I should try to edit my work better because I have made some grammar mistakes.
Improving My Articles! :-)
I think I can improve my articles more. When I re-read the last few articles I wrote and then also read the other students comments about my work, I found out where my weakness is in my writing. I think I can improve by including more details and having a bit more info about the article. I’ve notice that in all the comments I got they said that I needed more detail. I’ve noticed myself that if I had more actual information about the article, it would have helped people understand the topic a little better. I will defiantly work on this.
By: Milky Milk
I REALLY need to fix my grammer and spelling. When I was looking over all my articles I found at least 4 mistakes per article. It was horrendous! One way I can fix that is by looking over my work thoroughly. Another way I can fix my english is to slow down and think about what what I'm writing. Finally, I could sit with a dictionary close by so I don't harass my parents all the time.
PURPLEMONKEY
I think my work could have some improvement. I used to have trouble with posting my report. In the beginning I was posting all my work in the 4th period section, ha! Even now, just finding the comments to my writing in order to write this took at least forty-five minutes. I’m serious… While reading others reflections on improving work, I found most were about how they could extend the length of their report. Apparently, the one comment I got was about how I can shorten my reflections: “I thought it would go on forever” said idk123. Thanks for giving me tips for improvements for future reference. I’ll be sure to take all constructive criticism into account for my next blog.
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